Second Draft of our Main Task

We have incorporated many changes to our title sequence to create our second draft. I managed to change the font to Baron Kuffner to give a more chilling tone to our titles rather than just plain titles. I have researched and found that this font is the best suited to our chosen genre. We have cut out our scenes with Arthur and Aashna at the end of our first draft as our feedback implied that the audience was very confused by the scene and didn't understand what was going on and what the scenes meant. We also felt as a group that the final scenes dragged the title sequence on slightly and that when re-watching it our title sequence come across more like a trailer than a title sequence for a movie. By cutting these scenes out we have been able to build even more suspense for the audience as they don't find out what happens to the characters in the title sequence and await their fate, meaning that our title sequence now follows more thriller genre conventions in our second draft as it builds suspense for the audience and the audience are awaiting the characters fait,.